'Twas the night before christmas,and all around the house,not a bird could be seen or even a mouse,we'd left on the bench a good cup of cocoa and biscuits just so santa will be good for christmas.
We kids were snuggled in our beds all you could see were the tips of our heads,mum in her slippers dad in gown, while they sat and had a nice chat on the ground.
When outside the house such a noise arose and a bang and a clang and then "Dohh my nose!" i woke from my glourise doze and ran straight to the door with a click and a clan and then out popped a very curious looking man.
His eyes like the sun ohh how they shined, he had a wide face and a big roung tummy, it's obvious he ate his christmas dinner early!
He did not talk as he placed himself on his bum.
I could see one toy gun and a bag of lollies for my friend holly.
He climbed into his motorbike with his seven sheep and shouted,"come on you heep,""mollie polly get amove on we still have to get to the next house along!"
So as he started to departure i shouted out "Thank you mate"he replied with "merry christmas and don't you stay up to late!"
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11 years ago
4 comments:
thats a cool shrt story. how long did it take you to write that? it rhymes a bit to which is cool. plz comment on my dan carter post
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Very cool, I am out of school, I have a bad cold, you should have the story sold. I enjoyed it very much so, and santa dint say ho ho. (He he it rhymed!)
Bravo, EXCELLENT!
Good to see you exercising your writing muscles at home also. :-)
Funny! Very Kiwi!
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